A logical average score.
I've seen many artists that act like being a a better flash maker makes you a better artist and vice versa,but your art and animation is grand even if the cartoon style you used was that generic late 90s comedy anime. The reason why a gave you a average score is that while it should be pointless as its a girl chasing a fly,it was too short to add more humor and had too much effort to dismiss it as a beginner's try.(Which you aren't anyway.)